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NaPoWriMo Day 12: Describe in great detail your favorite room, place, meal, day, or person. You can do this in paragraph form. Now cut unnecessary words like articles and determiners (a, the, that) and anything that isn’t really necessary for content; leave mainly nouns, verbs, a few adjectives. Cut the lines where you see fit and, VOILA! A poem!


 Shiny black, leather, supple, loud, light, fast

Power rumbles beneath my seat

Hugs me in the turns, as I make love to the straight-away

You are in my hands and I am out of control

Or is it in reverse?

Knows my favorite music, and how to blow my hair

With you, I would go anywhere.

~Just L (April 12, 2015)

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